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Nowadays, more and more people prefer to eat food

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简介:Nowadays, more and more people prefer to eat food in restaurants and buy food in shop. However, there is a bad phenomenon which people always waste a lot of food. This is a serious phenomenon, so huma ...
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Nowadays, more and more people prefer to eat food in restaurants and buy food in shop. However, there is a bad phenomenon which people always waste a lot of food. This is a serious phenomenon, so human need to do some tasks to deal with it.

 

Why the phenomenon is common in the social? I think that there are some factors effect it. The main effect is economy because more and more people live in a wealthy life and they do not care about the food. For example, students prefer to hold a party and eat an abundant food in restaurant, so they sometimes waste a lot of food and do not pick up the rest food.

 

On the other hand, the technology is also effect. There is a person who called Yuan L.P. He is a famous scientist of agriculture. In addition, he created some new planted technology that can grow a number of crops. These methods help more people which is hunger. In my view, people waste a lot of food because they have enough food to eat.

 

How to solve the problem? In my opinion, shops and restaurants can make some policy to encourage people save food. For example, if some people can run out their food, they can have a discount or prize. This is a good method to solve it. Meanwhile, government can also make some methods. For example, government can shoot an advertising about saving food. This can encourage some people to save food.

 

In a nutshell, the economy and technology are the important effects to cause people waste many foods. In addition, shops and restaurants can make some policies for people which save food .Meanwhile, government can shoot some advertisings to encourage people to save food.

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