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an increasing number of people are concerned about the modern study method

2019-10-23 11:32| 发布者: admin| 查看: 691| 评论: 0

简介:Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the modern study method. However, whether we should study at home or in class has recently caused a heated debate. My view is that both of ...
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      Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the modern study method. However, whether we should study at home or in class has recently caused a heated debate. My view is that both of these two methods have benefits but for different kinds of people.

     It is clear that learning in the real class is more effective. This is because students in the class can interact with teachers better, and they can deal with their problems immediately by asking the teachers. Therefore, it is necessary for students to study in the college or university.

     Moreover, the teacher can supervise all the students in the class directly. Some students are not very dedicated when they are learning, so the teachers can remind them and help them to regulate their behavior and form a good study habit. This must be a huge benefit for students to attending high schools.

     However, it is also true that studying at home with distance-learning programs can benefit people. Public can also study plenty of things with distance-learning, and this method is very flexible in time and place. So it is very suitable for those people who have already worked or do not have the opportunities to go to school.

     In summary, both of these two study methods have advantages. Distance-learning programs are more applicable for those person who can not go to school regularly while attending high schools is more suitable for students. We must depend on our own situation to choose what kind of study method we can use. 

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