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The issue of artistic value has been a prevailing one

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简介:The issue of artistic value has been a prevailing one,with some people claiming that individuals all over the globe can be bonded with each other by music.From my perspective, I take side with this vi ...
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The issue of artistic value has been a prevailing one,with some people claiming that individuals all over the globe can be bonded with each other by music.From my perspective, I take side with this view of point.

To begin with,in spite of various ages or social background,music-oriented appearance tends to trigger empathy from bottom of the heart among the public with the same emotion.There is always the case that people stand together to fight for enemies and invasion hearing the magnificent music in fast rhythm,which deeply touched their souls spiritually and stimulated their anger simultaneously.In YouTube,for instance,it proves that the sorrow but peaceful mood towards the song Yesterdayof well-known brand,the Beatles,are aroused with countless comments online matched to it,from people in diverse nations with different colors.

Moreover,music not only owns its emotional value,it also carries its cultural value, as a window, allowing the ordinary people to access to mysterious history.Rock and roll,for example,represents a mainstream of soul music,having introduced its rebellious and revolutionized spirit against suppression and racial discrimination to a universal range,which has enhanced the peaceful cognition and consensus within people both from previously colonized areas or economically advanced areas.By unique melody and lyric,each masterpiece on music spread its attitude and outlook upon a historical event,so as to connect each of us to watch in the same direction.

In conclusion,only by inheriting and propagating different sorts of music,the treasure of humans civilization,would we reach a real globalization where each individual is hand in hand together.

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