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English陪练学习| 雅思英语类别： 雅思口语一对一陪练，托福口语，日常英语口语，商务英语口语，以及幼儿英语口语。 同时本公司也承接雅思口语陪练，留学服务，雅思作文批改精批等业务。 如下为同学雅思原文: Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Recent years have seen a severe degradation of the environment, and thus as a solution, some people argue that a good way to mitigate the problem is to rise the price of the fuels. However, I am not in favor of this opinion. It is undeniable that make the cost of fuels more unaffordable does aid to ameliorate environmental problems to some extent. For example, this approach can deter the public, especially the underprivileged, from using private cars, which can reduce the release of carbon dioxide astronomically. Nevertheless, detrimental ramifications of rising cost of fuels can be too numerous to be enumerated. The paramount one is that it stifles the economic development ineluctably. Rising cost of fuels would make it more expensive to transport and commute, and thus promote the expenditure of many businesses. If companies avoid using vehicles to travel, their efficiency would be reduced, undermining their productivity too. Therefore, on no account this means can be harmful for the economy growth. Additionally, prohibitively high fuel price imposes a burden on the ordinary public, which leads to inconvenience of life. Taking budgets for transport into consideration, many people would choose public trains and buses instead of private cars albeit the former choice would waste large mounts of time. In this case, increasing cost of fuels sparks the problem of inconvenience. In conclusion, rise the price of fuels can act as way to help preserving the environment, but I believe that it is not a favorable way because of its bad implications for the economy and individuals’ life. 如下为外教修改后的作文：
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