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Some people think children should go to school as early as possible

2019-10-26 11:10| 发布者: admin| 查看: 985| 评论: 0

简介:Some people think children should go to school as early as possible,while others believe that children should go to school when they are at least 7 years old.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Some people think children should go to school as early as possible,while others believe that children should go to school when they are at least 7 years old.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In current society, when is the best time to go to school for children has triggered a heated discussion. Some one believes their children should go to school more earlier. But another people think that the best time to go to school for children is after about 7 years old.

It is reasonable for some people to believe that the children should go to school as early as possible, the first recognition is that the children who go to school earlier are more likely to secure a decent employment earlier in the future. Because they begin approve the education more earlier than the peers, they might graduate from their college more earlier than others. On top of that,If children go to school as early as possible, they could become independent and self-sufficient and acquire social cooperation skills in advance. Because they leave away from their parents earlier than other children, this lead to they will more earlier learn how to take care after themselves well and how to work with their peers .

However, there are also some dissenting voices about this debate. Opponents believe that they should go to school after 7 years old. At first, they think they must have enough ability to take after themselves well. If they go to school more earlier, they are not enough mature to cope by themselves. A study has shown that a small percentage of young people struggle to adapt to the school life. Besides,they think these children are too young that cannot understand the knowledge and skills quickly. By contrast,some children who go to school after 7 years old, they might embrace enough capacity to deal with these problems.

In sum, although there are numerous advantages that children go to school earlier, I tend to believe that young children should go to school at least 7 years old.It is necessary for them to have enough capability to study.

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