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I am writing to let you know

2019-10-27 11:53| 发布者: admin| 查看: 962| 评论: 0

简介:I am writing to let you know how I enjoy your performance in the TW concert last week. Your performance is excellent I have never heard before. I feel your voice not only relaxed me, but also gave me ...
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Begin your letter as follows:  Dear_______,

 Dear Mary,

  I am writing to let you know how I enjoy your performance in the TW concert last week. Your performance is excellent I have never heard before. I feel your voice not only relaxed me, but also gave me new ideas about my musical activities.

 My musical activity is singing in the perfect club which is for elder people who have interested in performance as a new hobby. I joined this club for five year, and recently I am invited to join a special group which will go to China next month. Thus, I think I need more practices to keep my voice stability.  

 Thus, I would like to ask you whether you have free time to help me with my performance. Because after I heard your performance, I do believe you are good at this skill. I hope to practice with you for my singing skills.

 Looking forward to hearing from you.

 Maggie

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