Some people hold the view that to accept a bad situation such

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Some people hold the view that to accept a bad situation such as terrible financial situation, is considerably wise in life. However, I strongly claim that it is better to get away from dilemma, and improve such situations.

To tolerant a bad situation presents a brilliant persistence and patience.As is known to all, life is full of ups and downs, where people may take a hard hit.For instance, the 1930's economy crisis ruined the economic basis of American citizens, few of whom were able to suffer it, begging for food along the streets and wearing old totters.Many people were dead for poverty,but only those who accepted a bad situation and kept themselves a good mood struggled to suffer.They heard pieces of advice from the government and bear in mind that it would be better in latest future.To some extent, the situation indeed become better day by day.

But gone were the situations due to those who still spared their best to change reality positively.The new government took the authority and then adopted positive and tough measures quickly.Even though the economic situation was dramatically taxing, the effective actions worked, and gradually, the life quality of citizens was enhanced a lot.Hence, when confronted with terrible situation, the only way to sustain was trying to solve problems, rather than accepting and cherishing illusions.

So I must admit that to try our best to solve problems is the key to address challenging problems and difficulties. We must keep  optimistic attitudes toward life.

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