雅思英语类别: 雅思口语一对一陪练,托福口语,日常英语口语,商务英语口语,以及幼儿英语口语。 如下为同学雅思原文: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter l describe what you enjoyed about the course l say how much cooking you've done since the course l suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to let you know how much I enjoyed cookery course that I did last week in your school. It was a short cookery course is teaching us to make a “ring” cake. Eventually, I did a good job and gained much fun with your course. Litter do I into account I can make a cake before your course. However, after I finished your course last week, I already made five cakes for my relatives and friends during this week. All of them gave me an excellent taste about my cake. When I heard these feedbacks, I felt more successful with my baking skills. There is a suggestion for your cookery course. Well know is that more and more Chinese people recently live here. Thus, it is through Chinese recipe that is offered by your school I do believe can increase a numbers of customer. Thank you for reading my feedback. Maggie 如下为外教修改后的作文: |