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English陪练学习| 雅思英语类别： 雅思口语，托福口语，日常英语口语，商务英语口语，以及幼儿英语口语。 同时本公司也承接雅思口语陪练，留学服务，雅思作文批改等业务。 如下为同学雅思原文: Without rules and laws, we cannot build a
prosperous society. A prosperous society needs its citizens have a conscious of
regulations. For example, if individuals were free to do whatever they want,
the society is likely to get mess. Also, our environment will be damaged by
people’s terrible behaviors, such as getting rid of rubbish, cutting trees and
contaminate water randomly. These behaviors all need rules and laws to be
restricted and they will pose a threat to people’s living standard and the
economic development of our society. In addition, people need rules and laws to
regulate their behaviors in order to get a decent job since behavior can
influence one’s career. Employers are more likely to employ those people who
has good behaviors. For instance, people are able to finish their works with a
high quality, if they work under the serious company rules. Employees are more
likely to get food grades if they obey every rule and law. Therefore, they will
have a brilliant job prospect. However, to much rules and laws may limit
one’s freedom and creation. People are afraid of making mistakes during their
work for which they may be punished by company or their boss. Under the
pressure of being dismissed, they cannot conduct new creations for their work,
which may enhance their companies’ benefits. For stuff, it is hard to get
achievement, for company, they cannot gain a dramatic development. Overall, I reckon that rules and laws can
help the society to reduce many troubles, although it may pose an opposite impact
on our freedom and creation. 如下为外教修改后的作文：   如下为下载链接（包含了同学原片以及修改后的，请下载后电脑查看，手机无法看到完整版）： |
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