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如下为同学雅思原文： Overall, it has undergone dramatic
changes,in order to cater for the needs of people.Many new features have been
added including new books,self-service desks and computers with internet
access. The whole area was and is still divided
into three sections.At the bottom,the entrance has remained unchanged.In the
year 1995,the west side of the entrance was local reference books,whereas the
current one is new books.At the same time,the situation of photocopiers has
remained the same.
In the middle, computers without internet
access and librarian’s desks have been moved out.The former has been replaced
by chairs,the later has been displaced by self-service desks.Between chairs and
self-service desks,it is a book display.Not only has its rectangular shape in
1995 been transformed into the oval shape,but also the land area has been
extended.
At the top,as it was in 1995 ,it was
reference books and maps,while the current one is computers
with internet access. 如下为外教修改后的作文：
 
如下为下载链接（包含了同学原片以及修改后的，请下载后电脑查看，手机无法看到完整版）：
雅思作文批改.rar |
