The two maps below demonstrates clearly

雅思英语类别：     雅思口语，托福口语，日常英语口语，商务英语口语，以及幼儿英语口语。     同时本公司也承接雅思口语陪练，留学服务，雅思作文批改等业务。    如下为同学雅思原文：  In the first map,the island was empty.Just had a beach in the north west of island.Compered with second map,in the same position,people can enjoy the swimming time.Besides,it can find that the island is equipped with many tourist facilities.Such as,in the south west,the are accommodation.Crossing the footpath,the next is a vehicle track in the center of this island,which is connect with restaurant and pier.people can taste the traditional island food.what is more,near the pier,people can go boating.Then,in the east of the reception is also some accommodations.      On the other hand,even the island is equipped many tourist facilities than before,there are some similar conditions.Such as the area,people don not extent the island,which has almost size as before.What is more,it can clearly observer that in the east of island is still unexploited,just has some trees.  如下为外教修改后的作文： 如下为下载链接（包含了同学原片以及修改后的，请下载后电脑查看，手机无法看到完整版）： 雅思作文批改.rar