Human beings have different view

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Human beings have different view about children need to pay attention to all courses they learn at school or just emphasize on what they are good at or have a passion on. I argue that learning all there courses would better for their future life.

There are several reasons why person argue that youngsters only need to confuse what they are keen on. Firstly, young people have to take different kinds of classes, such as English, math, chemistry, geography and so on. It would be extremely hard for them to acquire tons of knowledge. Secondly, individuals claim that many subjects seem to unless for future life. For example, if someone want to be a math teacher. It would be a waste of life to spend too much time on other unrelated courses.

In my opinion, all the courses students have learnt would have a positive impact on them. A case in the point is that many students see history as boring, but they just have no choice to learn it in order to do well on the exam. Many reachers shows that history give students a better understanding of who they are and where they come from. They can also learn a lot from wise ancestors. In addition, when individuals want to find a job, they will find that employers may choose those who can speak English frequently and be good at computer softwares at the same time. This means the more we learn, the more we will attain.

In conclusion, while others accept that youth only need to learn what they like, I believe that they should they all subjects that would give them a leg up in their future.

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