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如下为同学雅思原文： Some people think
that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.
Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these
view and give your own opinion.
It can not be
denied that life is changeable and every one may get into a dilemma,how to deal
with this occasion has caused a heated debate.Some individuals believe we are
supposed to accept it,while other people harbor the view that we should improve
this kind of situation .Personally ,I agree the latter.
First of all, it
is usually regarded that it is hopeless and weak to accept the circumstance but
do not take any measures to change it.And it will get worse and worse without
any doubt .For instance ,if you have an occupation with low salary and you
never make any effort to practice your skills ,maybe you will never get
promotion.As a consequence, you can not provide your family with good living
standard and satisfied their further demand .I believe that only the weak will give
in to life ,conversely,what the strong
consider is how to make it better.
Moreover,It is the
dilemma that always motivate us to pursuit and accomplish a higher objective.
Only by making full use this opportunity can we transfer it into a turning
point and realize our value. Look back to the history,those who make great
contribution to the development of society, such as the scientists and
statesmen ,most of them were living in a life filled with difficulties
,.However,they never lost faith and then became the master of their lives.
This is not to say
that we should not accept the condition,it is obvious that accepting it is the
first step,which can help us to have a better understand of what looks like
presently and to be optimistic.After we have a direction and analysis of the
current situation ,what we need to do is moving forward to the next step ,to
exert ourselves to make a difference.
In
conclusion,faced with a hard condition,it’s wise to make a change rather than
just accept it,which will make you aware how strong and how diligent you can be.And absolutely your efforts will pay off in a long run . 如下为外教修改后的作文：
 
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