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如下为同学雅思原文: The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways
to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of different ways to solve the
global warming chosen by four different nation’s youngest in 2008.
It is obvious that the most of young people in Portugal prefer changing
life style to figure out the environmental problem,accounting for about 44%.The
percentage of government regulations and advanced technology are equal with
40%,which is higher than that in none of these by 10% in Portugal.
Young polish choose government regulation most with 30%,followed by life
style and none of these similarly with about 26%.Advanced technology ranks the
last,representing 10%.
In romanian people’s opinion,the youngest consider government regulation
and advanced technology have the same effect to solve the global warming with
20%.Additionally,life style takes up similarity with none of these with around
16%.
Dutch young people think advanced technology and none of these occupy the
same proportion about 30%.The figure of life style takes up less half of it
with 13%,followed by government regulation.
Overall,Portugal youngest think changing life style is most
important.Polish support government control most.While advanced technology is accepted by romanian and dutch. 如下为外教修改后的作文:
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