international tourism is the biggest industry in the world

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world.Some people think that international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extentdo you agree or disagree?

Currently,due to the increasingly popular of international tourism.There has been a point of view that the understanding between people from various countries is replanced by tension.My view is that although there is some truth in this view,I don't agree it.

It's true that cultural differences lead to tension between tourists and locals.This is mainly because local residents often communicat with others in their own habits and cultural way,while foreign visitors do not follow local customs.Therefore,the problem is triggered.For example, peiple living in Middle Eastern countries are conservative,North Americans are more liberal.This could cause cultural incomprehension.However,it is not the matter of international tourism but the lack of cultural understanding.

In addition,tourism can promote cultual understanding which can eliminate tension to a great extent.This could be illustrated by the fact that when somebody traveling other nations,they can get insight into divers customs and habits to identify differences and similarities so that build mutual respect.This explains why international tourism could promote cultual understanding rather than tension.

In conclusion,international travel is definitely useful to cultural understandibg between various countries.

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