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如下为同学雅思原文： Nowadays, most people learn
academic study at university, but others think we should encourage to learn
vocational skills more. Do you agree or disagree? Educational
has become one critical issue that captures public concern in consideration on
whet is the best approach for student. Some people hold the view that academic
study is the most effective way, while others think we should encourage student
to learn vocational skills. I agree with the latter.
Vocational
skills is a crucial ability that always neglect by students, because we
normally use a pen or and a paper to answer the superficial question without
vocation skills in order to pass the test. But in fact, vocation skills is necessary
for every student to study, because it can provide meaningful experiences that
can not replaced by a book. Only by student get experiences who can practice
the academic study into daily life.
In
addition, those who have studied vocational skills more are easier to find a
ideally job. For example, in most countries the manager tend to find a employee
who has a outstanding vocational skills with any circumstance. By comparison it
is hard for those concentrate on academic study with no practice skills to find
a well-paid job.
That
is not to say that we should neglect the academic study. Because academic study
is the basic of vocation skills, without which any practice is imagination with
no support. But practice is still more suitable for the majority of student in
this social condition.
In
conclusion, I personally think we should encourage to learn vocational skills
more. However, academic study can not be neglect at the same time. So the best
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