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如下为同学雅思原文： Some
people believe that the increasing business and culture between different
countries is a positive phenomenon.
Others
believe that this could lead to loss of national identities. Discuss both views
and give your own opinion.
With the
rapid development of global economy in recent decades , a vast majority of
people regard that various countries interact with each other via commerce and
civilization has its irreplaceable benefits, however, others insist the
opposite idea, which could cause absent of their own specific character of
their nation. As far as I consider, the interaction brings more advantages
outweigh the disadvantages.
Unfortunitly,
it became a noticed problem that more and more youth addicted with certain
foreign cultures without
self-distinguish , which could decrease the influence of national
civilizations. Secondly, the gap between rich and poor may be even wider
between countries’trade.
Gone
are days when people expert not contacting with foreigner whatever through the
travel, study or work. Firstly, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely
on the visitors form different countries, which did help for some rural areas. For
instance, my hometown became a hot tourism destination since the rape flowers
all over the mountains and plains as well as unique local culture. Local
citizens has got an army of benefits such as update public facilities,
transpotations, eduation even it was a
small village. Besides that, oversea study changed lots of youth of their the
future career because of knowing the latest information or technologies, due to
the horizon of them were be broaden. What’s more, the awareness of tolerance
and understand with other nation’s
culture has been increasing through the all kinds of social medias, which
reduced the conflicts among multiple cultures.
In a conclusion, any foreign
culture must go through the process of assimilation, conflict or partial
integration and convergence with the national culture, which would bring more
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