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如下为同学雅思原文： The diagrams
show GRANGE PARK at two different stages in its development: 1920 and now.
In 1920,
the fountain was located the center of the park. On the right side of fountain
was Pond for water plants ,which was on the top of glasshouse .on the other
side of fountain ,there was Stage for musicians, and one rose garden above and below of it
respectively.
Nowadays,
the center of the park was rose the bigger garden, which had
four branch of seats around it. On the right side, a café ，children’s
play area and water feature are new building insteaded the former facilities. On
the left side, there were one small rose garden and Amptheratre for concerts.
At
different stages, the entrance near ELDON STREET and another entrance near
ARNOLD AVERUE have never changed. What’s more ,an new entrance for underground
car parking occurred at the southeast corner . 如下为外教修改后的作文：  如下为下载链接（包含了同学原片以及修改后的，请下载后电脑查看，手机无法看到完整版）：
雅思作文批改.rar |
