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如下为同学雅思原文： Some
people think that high taxes are necessary so that government can have enough money
to provide good public services; while others disagree. Discuss both views and give
your own opinions.
People’s opinion differ as to whether or not
high taxes should be paid to the government. While there were some strong
arguments against the rising duties ,I still believe that it is necessary
aspect that kept a country and its social orders to work properly.
In the
one hand, we actually seen some drawbacks of the taxes. The gap between the
rich and the poor is not going to be reduced by taxes, it seems that it is
constantly increasing. Rich people have many ways to evade taxes, such as some
stars in the show business, as we known that the amount of tax they designedly
avoid is amazing. What’s more, corruption among quite a few tax officials was
growing due to the lack of strong supervision. Last but not least, the
endlessly construction of public facilities has affected the daily life of
local residents, in some cases where those facilities were not necessary.
However,on the other hand,governments should pay
the salaries of public sector workers like police officers and teachers. Those
necessary money was raised by taxing people's income. With the improvement of
living standard ,the official ‘s rewards would reasonable increase. As well as
more and more free education and health care may be provided by the state. Besides
that, some governments control public transport, transport systems and even tv
channels. All of those above needs leading to grow the level of tax.
In conclusion, as a disciplined taxpayer,
while I do not will to see rising taxes, but from a social development point of
view, it is our responsibility as citizens. 如下为外教修改后的作文：  如下为下载链接（包含了同学原片以及修改后的，请下载后电脑查看，手机无法看到完整版）：
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