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The bar chart compares the numbers of earning

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简介:The bar chart compares the numbers of earning of five different merchandise in one nation’s exports at stages:2015 and 2016. And the other diagram illustrate the specific proportion of change
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The bar chart compares the numbers of earning of five different merchandise in one nation’s exports at stages:2015 and 2016. And the other diagram illustrate the specific proportion of change.

It is clear that petroleum products and engineered goods take the most largest proportion of total exports, while the occupancy of agricultural products and textiles is relatively small.

According to the bar chart, petroleum products had the higest number of values in two years( 61 and 63 billions ), the lowest number of values was textiles (27billions)in 2015. In 2016, the same minimum number was obtained in agricultural products and textiles(31billions).

Looking at the below table, during 2015 and 2016. we can see that except of gems and jewellery was declined, other four products were grown up. Agricultural products changed the least, only 0.81%, while textiles changed the most, reaching 15.24%, but it still accounted for the smallest proportion of exports.

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