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The graph below shows the differences

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简介:The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

 

The line chart demonstrates the trends and statistics of wheat output in some areas (Australia, Canada and European Community) over the course of 1985 and 1990.

Overall, the largest exporter on average of the three is Canada whereas the least volume is witnessed in Australia. European Community, howeveris the only country which increases steadily and becomes the top in the last year.

First and foremost, Canada has got the highest figure in the beginning, and it has a considerable increase in the period of 1986 and 1988. Surprisingly, that number plunges the next year, from 25 millions of tonnes to approximately 15. Coming the second of the graph is European Community, which has seen a slightly decline in the first year, but then increase steadily in the rest of the years, surpassing Canada since 1989. As for Australia, it is the right opposite to EU, rises slightly in 1985 but decreases in the following years.

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