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Some people think that the development of technology

2019-10-11 10:04| 发布者: admin| 查看: 1101| 评论: 0

简介:Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology
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Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

An issue of technical applications has been a prevailing one,with some people claiming that it has become more complicated for our lives with technology so that it should be abandoned for an easy life.From my perspective, I firmly disagree with this viewpoint, and I believe that we humans could lead an efficient lives by the advancement of technology in the long run,notwithstanding the probable uncomfortable experience for some opponents in a short period.

To start with,there might be a case of a troublesome feeling occured when city dwellers take use of a high-tech product.However,such situation would be improved, and even tackled in the future.Firstly,due to the fierce competition in technique-immensed industry,those commodities which fail to cater to the demand of consumers tend to lose its market gradually,and then eventually be superseded by goods of commercial rivals.Secondly,the iteration updated to intelligent devices always come with the complaints of users,which takes steps to transfer a core technique to a welcoming electronic commodity.Finally,it takes time to get accustomed to a newly-released products,inevitably,for an ordinary people, who is not familiar with the manipulation at the initial period.Nevertheless,he or she is likely to live without this artifical intelligence,for example,an app on smart phones,allows the public successfully embrace it after publishing an instruction to it.

Furthermore,only by technical appications,could humans lead a relatively efficient life .As it universally acknowleged,high-end scentific skills play an indispansible role in boosting productivity,which contributes to the scales of enomony that increasing population could afford the products in a reasonble price.A car, for instance, previously sold at a huge cost,has gained its popularity amongst the mass with a declining price in recent years thanks to the technical revolution, in terms of its refreshed manufactory process on raw materials.Tough may it be to drive a car,would occupants willing to practise driving skill in order to save time on public transportation,thus to realise an life with efficiency.

In conclusion,I support that those high-end products with deficiency or improperness are not a reason for denying the presence of technology,without which would we hardly get used to contemporary life in need of efficiency.   

 

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