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如下为同学雅思原文: Both the poor and the rich find the
accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, most of the countries are
intending to accomplish the educational equality. Through examination, the
education institutions can offer a place to the students who get good grades,
and it seems every pupil have same opportunity to study for / do a degree. In
my view, I partly disagree that the two parties are facing same difficulty to
having a higher-education.
Firstly, it is commonly thought that poor
students are facing more stress to get into a university. It is because of
their less well-off family environment. Apparently, the poor parents are hard
to support and fulfil the education needs. For examples, costly tutor fees, no
time for home schooling. Besides, the parents who come from low society level
mostly are having lower education level, which may lead the difficulties of
helping their children to solve the studying problems. The poor learning
support and environment may eventually cause the poor results in the public
examination which make the failure of getting into the university.
However, to eliminate the educational
inequality, the government has adapted various financial policies to improve
the learning environment for the students in needed. The policies like
government grants and funding are aimed to give the poor pupils more motivation
and support. Money can help them to afford expensive tutor fees and to buy
better learning materials. Financial supports can effectively reduce the
inequal resource allocation. If every student were having same amount of
resources and helps, the opportunity of education may become equal. By
obtaining the government supports, we can say that all the students from
different backgrounds are having same ability to prepare their exams,
therefore, they are having same changes to obtain higher-education.
In conclusion, I personally think that the
current education system is more favourable for the riches. But the government
policies properly shorten the gaps between the poor and the rich.
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