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The table illustrates the proportion of consumer’s expenditure

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简介:The table illustrates the proportion of consumer’s expenditure on three types of items in five different countries including Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
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 The table illustrates the proportion of consumer’s expenditure on three types of items in five different countries including Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey in 2002.

 As for food,drink and tobacco,Turkey accounts for the most percentage among the five countries, for 32.14%. Ireland is not far behind, occupying 28.91%. Afterwards,Spain is in a middle proportion level of 18.80%. Italy and Sweden is in the bottle of this item with a smillar percentage. Then the next column, Italy holds the ceiling value with 9.00%. There is not a great difference in the other four countries. The last category—leisure and education, Turkey also tops the list (4.35%). In contrast to the Spain, which just accounts for 1.98%. There is nothing special that Ireland occupies 2.21%.

 To sum up, all the five countries’ customers spend most on food, drinks and tobacco and the least on leisure and education.

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