There is a voice that

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There is a voice that,all college students should study nothing but they like,while some other people think only the courses which will be useful in the future ,like science and technology,should be allowed for college students.

  The first idea says university students can choose any class to study by their please.this idea may push while society forward. Because there are thousands of different subjects in the world and every single subject can benefit the  people’s lives more or less. For example, if there had were no Mozart or other musicians but only scientists , how dull and boring  lives will be. When students study whatever they like,more subjects can attract more attention and more likely  develop.Through this way,whole society make a progress constantly

  The second idea says university students should study only the subjects useful in the future. People who support this idea may think students are supposed to make a life by themselves in the future. If students study science or technology,they may become researchers or engineerings in the future. These jobs can offer steady salary and granting of lives. As a result,parents and governments don’t need to give a hand to graduated students, they can make a life by themselves.

  In my opinion, the first idea is more reasonable .Because it shows university’s spirit of freedom and humanity. University is a place where people share their ideas and try to get new progress in their own field. Students should be encouraged to have their own choices freely and universities should keep students’ right.

Only in this way,can  atmosphere of freedom spread 

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