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The graphs given illustrate the changes

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简介:The graphs given illustrate the changes to a college campus between 1975 and 2020.

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The graphs given illustrate the changes to a college campus between 1975 and 2020.

A ton of developments have taken place from 1975 to 2002. one significant change is that the original library was divided into two parts, with the western part used as an IT room. Besides, the road starting from sports center surrounded by several trees was demolished in order to set aside space for the construction for the science building. Additionally, the drama room which was situated to the north of the music room was converted into the geology room.

Comparing two graphs, we can see the sports center originally located in the northern part is projected to be rebuilt into a new indoor sports center, with a new path leading to the IT room, in 2002.

In conclusion, some developments have occurred in the campus, with further developments are planned to be finished. The university provides students with a continually improving studying environment.

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