The two maps illustrate the changes of the road access

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The two maps illustrate the changes of the road access to a hospital in the year of 2007 and 2010.

In 2007, the City Road was on the south of the map. The Hospital Road crossed the middle of it and linked to the Ring Road, which was surrounding the city hospital. There were several bus stops on the both sides of the Hospital Road. On the east of them, a car park was available for not only the staff but also the public.

However, things changed a lot in 2010. The City Road and the Ring Road remained the same places as before. While two new roundabouts were built on them respectively, connected by the hospital road. Taking place of the previous bus stops, a huge bus station was located on the west of the Hospital Road and had accesses to both roundabouts. The old car park was changed for staff only. Correspondingly, a new one for public was constructed on the east of the Ring Road.

Overall, larger bus station and separated car parks were the most obvious changes from 2007 to 2010.

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