雅思英语类别: 雅思口语一对一陪练,托福口语,日常英语口语,商务英语口语,以及幼儿英语口语。 如下为同学雅思原文: The maps given illustrate the changes to the layout of the museum floor from 1998 to 2008. Overall, several changes have occurred. A significant change was that the permanent room on the western part downsized into order to set aside space for the construction of a restaurant on the top side. Besides, the temporary room which initially located to the south of permanent room was divided into two parts with western part used as a shop and the eastern one built into a coatroom. In the middle of the museum, the cafe originally sited to the north of the garden was converted into a WC, which was adhere to the cafe seating area on the south of it. Additionally, a fountain was added to the place sandwiched by the garden and the ticket. Comparing two maps, we can see the main change in the eastern side was that the original shop, WC and coatroom were removed, making the space of permanent room enlarge dramatically. In conclusion, some changes have taken place in the museum during the viewed period, making the museum more entertaining. 如下为外教修改后的作文: |