Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the importance of History courses. Whether History is important or not has becoming a heated debate. My view is that History is important for sure, but it is not the most important one for anyone.

Firstly, different people have different brains, different ideas, different thinking, so that they will have different choices when they enter the university. For example, a student from the Chemistry Department will be exposed to problems related to Chemistry day and night, so there is no need for them to spend plenty of time to learn history. That’s why there are a large number of majors in the universities today.

Secondly, with the rapid development of Internet, if you really hope to know the history of somewhere, you can get the information online as soon as you wish. For example, when you go somewhere new for traveling, the first thing you concerned about is must not the history there, but the climate, the accommodation price and the scenery. So in my opinion, History is an assistant subject among the whole courses.

That is not to say that History is not important. The history of a country or city will be a very good way to learn about there. Historian will illustrate us why a place fall or down. Know more about history will also let you see more clearly about this world. But probably it is just a tool for a small number of people.

All in all, there are too many subjects which are more commonly used in our daily life than history. History is a wonderful subject which contained a lot of unknowns to learn, but I believe for most of people it is not the most important one.

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