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The given maps reveal the appearance of conference center now

2020-1-10 19:26| 发布者: admin| 查看: 700| 评论: 0

简介:The given maps reveal the appearance of conference center now and the schemes for its improvement. The map of the future plan illustrates that the center will be more modernized and diversified.

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The given maps reveal the appearance of conference center now and the schemes for its improvement. The map of the future plan illustrates that the center will be more modernized and diversified.

From the start of left, nowadays the place has two meeting rooms. However, in the future it will expend for three rooms even though the total area of that field doesn’t enlarge. Meanwhile,  the cafe will relocate in the middle of center as well as near the hall. It is noticeable that the tiny kitchen will be established near the cafe. Furthermore, the original of the cafe will be replaced by fitting room. 

On the right of the map, current gardens are small and locate near the car park. In the future gardens will have the same size as car park. The plan also shows that the they will dismantle the side road connecting to car park, instead two new entrances will be constructed in the bottom of the road. Finally, the toilet and reception are still in the primitive location.

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